Sleeping Valor

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He just watched the scariest movie , he had ever seen. remove the comma Chris hated scary movies, so why did he watch that one? He didn’t know. Were adults ...

"What's going on? Where are you going?" Keith looked up as he hunted around for a weapon. He had ignored the man and the woman since their first encounter, despite ...

IC Keith was caught off guard when he realized someone was crying. As quietly as he could, he opened the door and stepped out into the hallway. He followed the ...

There are those who are well-off in this world with great jobs that carry them through life, and those who have jobs that pay the bills, and not much is ...

Posted a bit of the new version of the prologue at the end of the first post. Lemme know if it looks better.

Thanks for your advice. You're absolutely right. >.< I must be more out of practice than I thought to have missed that. I've already started reworking the prologue already, though ...

Don't do it!!! I have so many started but unfinished stories it isn't funny. I find an idea I love, then suddenly one that I like more comes along...and then ...

Baby carrots is out. =P The rest is amusing, better than the first part. The added description I makes it about ten times better. And yes, if you are going ...

Ok, I love Stephanie Meyer and worship the paper she writes on, but I won't lie; this was amusing. There, pat on the back done. It's pretyt hard to critique ...

Actually, I really apreciate the more harsh critiques. It's always nice that people like what you write, but it's just as nice to be able to make it better. It's ...

Sounds good. But might i suggest switching the k for a c (or double c depending on how you want ti to sound)? Unless you do want the relation to ...

You definitely need to go more into detail. The story looks good but it's as if we're listening to an audio recording, almost; you hear their voices but you don't ...

=P I didn't see that. Thanks!

^_^ Thanks for the comments everybody, since there is an interest I'll work on getting the first chapter finished! (and I'll see what I can do about clearing up who ...